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  •  03-07-2010, 10:41 PM 97102

    My Long Story

    I wanted to take a break from writing my Biology essay so I decided to write a story about us =3

    The story is all serious! So there wont be any Pokemon or real Banjo-Kazooies in it Stick out tongue [:P]

    Some of you who don't appear in the story yet may appear later, so don't feel sad if you wern't included (It's only part one!)

    I'll have part two up sometime tomorrow.

    Enjoy!

    ________________________________________
    “Too Far”
    By SilverAntari

    -PART ONE-

    “Wow” Said Silver, looking at a message posted by SonicFan91 on the Banjo-Kazooie forums. “Portal 2 will be great!”
    As he scrolled down and read more, his expression changed.
    “Why must SpeedyBlueDude argue with everything everyone does? And why does Wert always have to talk back?”
    He put his hands on the keyboard, eyes still focused on the screen.
    ‘Why are you two out of the kitchen?’ he typed.
    He clicked back onto the Everything Else message board. He noticed a new thread had been made by SlimJim, entitled ‘My Short Story’.

    He moved his mouse courser over the title, but before he clicked he heard a noise downstairs.
    He checked the time at the corner of the screen – 4 AM.
    “Who the hell is up now?” he thought to himself.
    He decided to check it out. He walked downstairs quietly until he reached the kitchen. He walked through the open doorway and was suddenly struck in the back of the head, and fell to his feet.

    Silver awoke several hours later, to a man lightly nudging him. He could tell he wasn’t in his house anymore. This place was dark and gloomy. The floor, walls and ceiling were all just plain stone,
    “Who are you?” he said slowly, trying to remember just what had happened to him.
    “Well, you know me as Wert AC.”
    With those words, Silver jumped to his feat. He looked around and noticed many more people, all roughly the same age. One of the strange men stepped forwards.

    “Good to see you’re finally awake” said the man; holding out his right hand,
    “You know me as SlimJim”
    Silver closed his eyes.
    “This is not happening” he mumbled to himself.
    “I’m afraid it is.” Replied Wert,
    “Someone’s taken our little forum too far.”

    Wert pointed to another one of the strange men,
    “That’s Val” he said, “He woke up a few minutes ago”.
    He pointed to another person.
    “He’s Sajex.”
    The young man being pointed at gave a little nod.
    “That guy over there” Wert said, now pointing at a young man huddled up and crying in the corner, “That’s SpeedyBlueDude”.
    “You know me”, butted in another young man, “As Snakebite. And I swear to god I’m not the reason we’re all here”

    “Okay, then why are we here?” asked Silver, now wide awake.
    “We don’t really know” replied Wert with a little uncertainty in his voice, “But I know for a fact it can’t be good.”
    Silver looked Wert in the eye.
    “Why not?”
    “Because” replied Wert, “We found a Slinky”.

    END OF PART ONE :D
  •  03-07-2010, 10:51 PM 97103 in reply to 97102

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    Re: My Long Story

    epic, can wait till part 2.


  •  03-07-2010, 11:00 PM 97105 in reply to 97103

    Re: My Long Story

    I'm glad you like it ^_^ I'll have Part Two up later. It's 5AM now and I really need some sleep.
  •  03-08-2010, 2:37 AM 97111 in reply to 97105

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    Re: My Long Story

    I'm surprised you didn't have Slimjim crying in the corner...

    Anyway, I'm not quite sure about the story, but great writing style Smile [:)]



  •  03-08-2010, 3:28 AM 97117 in reply to 97102

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    Re: My Long Story

    Awesome story. It seems like a good beginning. Keep it up. Smile [:)]


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  •  03-09-2010, 12:33 AM 97221 in reply to 97102

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    Re: My Long Story

    I hope I get to be the evil guy.

    I'm not crazy, just... enthusiastic.
    Nobody bites the Dust.
    There's nothing on the internet you'll only find once.
    Zombies don't kill, they recruit.
    Don't argue with me. I like to argue.
  •  03-09-2010, 3:50 AM 97231 in reply to 97221

    Re: My Long Story

    and im the Minion Klongo

    Looking for any Online Players Message me !!

    GT: David xd2 - Clan Account : Raz Sha Clan
  •  03-09-2010, 12:06 PM 97244 in reply to 97231

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    Re: My Long Story

    David xd2:
    and im the Minion Klongo

    Klungo's lesser known brother.

    I'm not crazy, just... enthusiastic.
    Nobody bites the Dust.
    There's nothing on the internet you'll only find once.
    Zombies don't kill, they recruit.
    Don't argue with me. I like to argue.
  •  03-09-2010, 5:00 PM 97265 in reply to 97244

    Re: My Long Story

    Banjo Threeie - Saw it on youtube

    Looking for any Online Players Message me !!

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  •  03-09-2010, 6:01 PM 97268 in reply to 97102

    Re: My Long Story

    SilverAntari:
    I wanted to take a break from writing my Biology essay so I decided to write a story about us =3

    The story is all serious! So there wont be any Pokemon or real Banjo-Kazooies in it Stick out tongue [:P]

    Some of you who don't appear in the story yet may appear later, so don't feel sad if you wern't included (It's only part one!)

    I'll have part two up sometime tomorrow.

    Enjoy!

    ________________________________________
    “Too Far”
    By SilverAntari

    -PART ONE-

    “Wow” Said Silver, looking at a message posted by SonicFan91 on the Banjo-Kazooie forums. “Portal 2 will be great!”
    As he scrolled down and read more, his expression changed.
    “Why must SpeedyBlueDude argue with everything everyone does? And why does Wert always have to talk back?”
    He put his hands on the keyboard, eyes still focused on the screen.
    ‘Why are you two out of the kitchen?’ he typed.
    He clicked back onto the Everything Else message board. He noticed a new thread had been made by SlimJim, entitled ‘My Short Story’.

    He moved his mouse courser over the title, but before he clicked he heard a noise downstairs.
    He checked the time at the corner of the screen – 4 AM.
    “Who the hell is up now?” he thought to himself.
    He decided to check it out. He walked downstairs quietly until he reached the kitchen. He walked through the open doorway and was suddenly struck in the back of the head, and fell to his feet.

    Silver awoke several hours later, to a man lightly nudging him. He could tell he wasn’t in his house anymore. This place was dark and gloomy. The floor, walls and ceiling were all just plain stone,
    “Who are you?” he said slowly, trying to remember just what had happened to him.
    “Well, you know me as Wert AC.”
    With those words, Silver jumped to his feat. He looked around and noticed many more people, all roughly the same age. One of the strange men stepped forwards.

    “Good to see you’re finally awake” said the man; holding out his right hand,
    “You know me as SlimJim”
    Silver closed his eyes.
    “This is not happening” he mumbled to himself.
    “I’m afraid it is.” Replied Wert,
    “Someone’s taken our little forum too far.”

    Wert pointed to another one of the strange men,
    “That’s Val” he said, “He woke up a few minutes ago”.
    He pointed to another person.
    “He’s Sajex.”
    The young man being pointed at gave a little nod.
    “That guy over there” Wert said, now pointing at a young man huddled up and crying in the corner, “That’s SpeedyBlueDude”.
    “You know me”, butted in another young man, “As Snakebite. And I swear to god I’m not the reason we’re all here”

    “Okay, then why are we here?” asked Silver, now wide awake.
    “We don’t really know” replied Wert with a little uncertainty in his voice, “But I know for a fact it can’t be good.”
    Silver looked Wert in the eye.
    “Why not?”
    “Because” replied Wert, “We found a Slinky”.

    END OF PART ONE :D

    ... oh thank god you didn't fantasize about us.


    Also, technically, when we get in a fight, we all "cry", not just me.

    DancesWithH0gs= Gay Canadian >:(
    IronTyrant= My *** :3
  •  03-09-2010, 6:06 PM 97269 in reply to 97268

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    Re: My Long Story

    Technically, yes. You aren't crying, you're whining THEN crying.
    And there was no fight in the story.


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  •  03-09-2010, 7:45 PM 97278 in reply to 97269

    Re: My Long Story

    Sajextryus:
    Technically, yes. You aren't crying, you're whining THEN crying.
    And there was no fight in the story.

    Yes, same to you sajex, you whine and cry.


    Did I ever say there's fighting the story? Nope.
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  •  03-09-2010, 7:49 PM 97280 in reply to 97102

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    Re: My Long Story

    You fail to capture my real-life persona :3 ...Of course, nobody here actually knows what that would be xD .
    <<click here for announcement>>
  •  03-09-2010, 8:02 PM 97281 in reply to 97221

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    Re: My Long Story

    Dust, I never really knew that you existed until today. And yet, I don't want to know you. I hate when new members do this. My forum birthday is coming.
  •  03-09-2010, 8:22 PM 97282 in reply to 97278

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    Re: My Long Story

    SpeedyBlueDude:
    Sajextryus:
    Technically, yes. You aren't crying, you're whining THEN crying.
    And there was no fight in the story.

    Yes, same to you sajex, you whine and cry.


    Did I ever say there's fighting the story? Nope.

    Uhh, yeah, you did. Yes. And I don't whine and cry. At least, not since my grandmother died, but I was 7, so that's pretty normal.
    Edit: I locked this post because it would be pointless to respond other than if you were flaming me, which wouldn't be good.


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